Class Feedback on Film Pitch

We also asked our peers which name they think the film should be called, we asked them to write down their favorite name idea based from a list presented (below) and we came to the conclusion that 'Outlaw' was the most popular name voted for by the class. Therefore our film will be called 'Outlaw'. Something that was not outlined in the presentation was how we were to present the titles of the film, we intend to slow down shots and 'engrave' or embed the credits onto walls and into knives so that they become a part of the scene. We also received feedback from our classmates who commented on the theme, genre, narrative, target audience, institution and whether they would pay to see the movie and any other comments they have on the idea. Here is some of the feedback we received which was necessary for us to evaluate and thus respond to the comments.


@ 'The idea is really ambitious and sounds very exciting. Credit to them if all of the effects on after effects work out. Sometimes super ambitious projects can be a let down. I have confidence in you if you're willing to put in the time for the special effects".


@ "Keep in mind the idea of props and special effects i.e. fire/gunshots etc".


@ "This film takes influence from DeadPool with the anti-hero and a comedy-action genre throughout so I like the idea and would see it, it certainly sounds interesting".


@ "The target audience suits the film well as the action and comedy appeals to a teenage audience".


@ Finally the last comment which was "The film sounds intriguing, I would definitely watch this film".

Overall, our presentation seemed popular among our peers, we received no negative comments and everyone showed clear interest in our project and our ideas for the film opening. We have learnt that they like the editing style and our ambitions for the project so we intend to keep the use of special effects and want to continue experimenting with Adobe After Effects so we can achieve a high standard, professional-looking film opening.